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  1. How to Describe a Horse in a Story

    "The horse was agile as it leapt over the different gates." "The agile horse easily darted around the flames and falling roof beams of the burning farm." How it Adds Description. Describing a horse as agile is good if you want to describe the way it moves easily and quickly. Since horses are intelligent creatures, an agile horse could ...

  2. How to Describe Horses in Fiction

    Describing Horse Height. Horse height is classically measured in "hands". The unit itself originated as being based on the breadth of the human hand but is now standardized to four inches. So if you had horses, each an inch taller, they would be 15 hands, 15.1, 15.2, 15.3 and 16 hands each (15.4 = 16 hands). This system of measurement ...

  3. How to Describe Horses: Adjectives & Examples

    When it comes to describing horses, it's important to choose adjectives that convey their unique qualities and characteristics. Whether you're writing a story, working on a project, or simply want to appreciate these magnificent creatures, having a repertoire of descriptive words at your disposal can make all the difference.

  4. creative writing

    Horses are very much like ramped up dogs; the long face, the legs. They have hooves instead of paws. You have to add on manes and hairy tails. But if somebody has seen large dogs, like a Labrador Retriever or Greyhound, the horse is very similar. I'd look through breeds of dogs and see which one looks MOST like a horse, and describe it that way.

  5. How to Write Realistic Horses in Fiction

    3. Perfect horse/perfect rider- AKA "The Natural". The horse who is never used to the sights and sounds and smells of battle is completely bombproof. The horse can run forever. The "newbie" rider is a "natural". Hopefully by now you're seeing the "unrealistic alert" warning signs with this.

  6. How to Write Horses: The Terminology Trap • Mackenzie Kincaid

    1. Trade in your technical terms for common-sense descriptions that convey your meaning. You might be able to flawlessly analyze a horse's conformation and a rider's technique on the level of George Morris, but that doesn't help you much if your readers don't know what conformation is (or who George Morris is).

  7. Everything You Need to Know About Writing Horses Part 2: Riding 101

    3) multiple riders, one horse. Be kind to your fictional horses. Most horses can carry one rider comfortably, two riders if necessary. Anything more than that is going to hurt your horse or, quite simply, not fit on the horse to begin with. Consider the size of your character's horse.

  8. How to Write a Fictional Story About Horses: 11 Steps

    The humans try to ride one of the horses for the first time. The horses confront the emus over their grain greediness. One of the horses is ill and the humans must nurse him back to health. 8. List some events and put them in order. Write some notes about each one you will include. 9.

  9. 4 Tips for Writing About Horses

    Be Careful of Your Terminology. This advice goes both ways. For non-riders attempting to write about horses, make sure your terminology is correct. A few months ago, I was reading nonfiction submissions for a literary journal and came across a really delightful coming of age essay set in the country. Reading happily, I rolled through the ...

  10. Writing about Horses: 10 Tips from a Pro

    8. Vary the pace in your story to keep it interesting. Sometimes the action might be galloping along and sometimes it might slow down to a relaxing walk. 9. Research any facts you might need to keep your story real—horse books, magazines, videos and stable visits can be incredibly helpful. 10. Have fun writing about horses!

  11. Horse

    horse. - quotes and descriptions to inspire creative writing. Tucked beneath the woollen grey sky, there is a sweet warmth to the horse. He is at home here upon the heathered moor. By Angela Abraham, @daisydescriptionari, February 25, 2021 . The horse at gallop has such explosive energy that it resonates with the happiest version of me. By ...

  12. The Writer's Guide to Horses • Mackenzie Kincaid

    They appear in all sorts of genres, from epic fantasy to the zombie post-apocalypse, but horses can be one of the most difficult topics for authors to get right. This illustrated guide gives writers a leg up on their fictional equines. You'll find practical tips for crafting authentic equines in your works, avoiding the most common mistakes ...

  13. How To Write About Horses with Gillian Bronte Adams

    Gillian Bronte Adams is the horse-riding, wander-loving epic fantasy author of THE SONGKEEPER CHRONICLES and a YA trilogy coming 2021, rarely found without coffee in hand and rumored to pack books before clothes when she hits the road. Years of working in youth ministry left her with a passion for journeying alongside those who've tasted the ...

  14. A Writer's Guide to Horse Noises • Mackenzie Kincaid

    The problem with writing the roar is that many horse people will dispute that there is such a thing, and most non-horse people would imagine a roar like a lion, which horses obviously don't produce. ... 5 Tips for Writing Character Descriptions June 18, 2018. How to Write Horses: The Terminology Trap August 31, 2017. Writing Werewolves: The ...

  15. Everything A Fantasy Author Needs To Know About Horses And Mounts

    A brief guide to horses. The key thing to keep in mind is that horses and mounts aren't machines - they get tired, hungry, and they have feelings and personalities much like humans. That's not to say you should think of a horse as being the same as a human, but don't forget the 'living' part of 'living creature'.

  16. Writing Prompts about Horses

    2. Through Rain, or Snow, or Gloom of Night. From police to cowboys to stagecoach drivers, people from all walks of life have formed close bonds with their horses. Write about three ways horses have helped mankind throughout history. 3. Sitting Tall in the Saddle. Western style riding offers the security of a wide saddle, the casual feel of ...

  17. The Fantasy Writer's Guide to Horses

    Horses drink 5-10 gallons of water a day. They can only survive 3-6 days without water. Horses cannot puke. So if they eat something toxic, they can't puke it back up. Horses live to be 25-30 years old. Horses can swim, but some are afraid of water. Horses only sleep for 2 hours a day, and only a few minutes at a time.

  18. Setting Description Entry: Barn

    Prickly hay and straw, chaff sticking to the neck, getting into your shirt, rough boards, sweat trickling down your face, sides and back, a band of heat where your hat sits, swiping dust and chaff from clothes and hair, pulling on heavy work gloves, the dry & hairy tickle of horse lips nibbling up a treat of apple… Helpful hints:

  19. How to Write Horses: Equine Archetypes • Mackenzie Kincaid

    How to Write Horses: Equine Archetypes. One of the most common mistakes authors make when writing horses is treating the animals like automatons: the characters get on, ride somewhere, get off, and the horses just behave themselves and never set a foot wrong. So if you want to portray the horses in your story with more realism, they each need ...

  20. How to write a horse book

    Your text will be crisper; the pace will be faster; your book will be better. Show not tell may also help to force you into a more active writing style. Avoid passive voice wherever possible. The second sentence of this paragraph was written in active voice. The third I wrote in passive voice.

  21. Creative Writing For Horse-Lovers: Descriptive Writing (Horses

    Creative Writing for Horse-Lovers: Enjoy Descriptive Writing & Discussing Horses. In this on-going horse-themed class, students will enjoy talking & learning about horses while improving their creative descriptive writing skills. Each class includes a variety of engaging activities. Students love writing in this class!

  22. Creative Writing for Horse-Lovers: Enjoy Descriptive Writing

    Creative Writing for Horse-Lovers: Enjoy Descriptive Writing & Discussing Horses. Ms. Delang. 5.0. ( 61) Watch my teacher video! In this on-going horse-themed class, students will enjoy talking & learning about horses while improving their creative descriptive writing skills. Each class includes a variety of engaging activities.

  23. Help Describing a Carriage Ride?

    Assuming the horses are shod (have shoes on), it's going to be even louder. Personally, I can't think when working on pavement or packed gravel with a fully shod or half-shod horse. The class clip-clop sound is produced only by new shoes, and it doesn't take long (-1 week) for them to become scratch and produce a more grating sound.